All right, friends and neighbors, the homework I assigned last week is only due for me. You can send me your 0-1000 word story/poem from the prompt: “Write about something you left behind by accident and/or Write about something you left behind on purpose” anytime between now and September 1st.
Remember, you not only get featured on the blog, you get a free set of my steamy romance novels signed by me and braggin’ rights. So get me those entries, send them to the contact info on this site.
In the spirit of being a good example, I’m including not only a flash fiction piece but also a poem. Because prompts are expandable, remember I said that. Be creative. Hell, you know what? If you have a photo that you feel might fit with this prompt, send that in too! I’d love to see it…In fact, today’s photo was a result of said inspiration.
Get out there, get writing. Here’s my homework (you’re welcome to print it out and grab a red pen but you can’t send it back…)
Hyde Park
I left your scarf on a park bench
The sun came out
It was too warm
I pulled at it, slipped it down one side of my neck,
Set it beside my tea
And went back to the newspaper
The orb blazed brighter
Dropping my mind
into a haze of preoccupation
I tossed my cup in the bin
Tucked the paper under my arm
Fled the barrage of summer
And came home
Without your memory
hanging around my throat
That’s how you finally forget,
I suppose
Letting go happens when you’re least expecting
In the heat of a Tuesday afternoon,
On a bench in Hyde park
With a mind full of other things
Besides the tender hands that first placed it
In a sodden field,
blanketed with rain
The sun came out
It was too warm
I left you on a park bench.
Part The Second: The flashing fiction bit…
Diamond Trees Don’t Root Like Potatoes
So finely honed was the veiled disappointment in her face that I didn’t even need to look to know it was there.
“I’m sorry,” I shrugged over the potato peeler and the growing pile of gritty brown scraps beneath it.
“I just can’t believe you lost it!” her pitch rose and startled me.
My mom’s passive aggressiveness was legendary. She didn’t wield a battle-axe; she used a scalpel. She didn’t say outright what she meant; she kept the grudge seething for decades. That’s how the poison worked in our family. The curse of material prestige, the “what we owned” owning us. The things handed down like shackles being snapped into place.
“I said I was sorry,” I muttered. “It was an accident.”
In the way digging a hole and burying something akin to nuclear waste beneath an old billboard welcoming folks to Beautiful Bonnie Bay, Minnesota was an accident. Oops, I tripped and fell into a purposeful purge. Maybe a black little tree of greed would grow up from the seed. The idea was both ridiculous and frightening.
“She told me not to leave it to you until you were older! I should have held on to it,” she wiped the sweat from her forehead, and resumed her agitated pacing from pot to oven.
“No, you shouldn’t have,” I whispered.
“What?” Pacing stopped. “What did you say?”
Her new direct approach was something I attributed to the magic of the hated object lying beneath three feet of dirt and unable to inflict its venom. It could’ve been that she was just really…really pissed. That was okay, because at least she was being honest.
“I said,” I turned wielding the starchy peeler like an accusing finger. “That you shouldn’t hold on to it. To any of it, Mom.”
“What do you mean by that?”
“She spent years holding all these ‘treasures’ over your head, just like her mother did to her and probably hers before…making sure you stayed in line if you wanted to inherit–”
“That’s not true!” she shouted.
“She poisoned you!” I blurted out into the room still ringing with the echo of her voice. “She poisoned you into believing all those things were your worth! That they were her love. And you had to earn them, and that she could take them away just like that!” The snap of my fingers startled her like a coma patient waking.
“I don’t… know what–” she sputtered and took hold of the counter with fingers clenching.
“You deserved loved from her. You deserved better! You are worth so much more than a broach, or a set of dishes, or a closetful of linens. And you’ll always have my love, no matter what you give me, even if it’s just the time you spend yelling at me over a piece of cut rock. I’ll love you! ‘N you never have to buy it, or earn it. It’s just there.”
It would have been customary for one or both of us to turn away or huff off to a different room where we’d place the grudge dutifully on our shoulders. But she came to stand beside me, facing out into the kitchen and catching her breath, slowing into calm.
I picked up the half-naked potato and finished his delicate undressing so he could join his skinny-dipping friends in the pot.
Mom sighed while her eyes closed out the room and her mind reread every cursive note attached to every object filling the boxes in the attic.
I leaned the warmth of my hip against hers and listened to the jangle of sharp metal over thick skin. Finding the white tenderness, separate from all the dirt, gave me appreciation for the rugged beauty of rooted things, and the glimmer of hope for a barren ground above the broach’s final resting place.
